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    Sadistic dehumanizing BDSM fantasy stories are great to read When it's femdom with ff it's even better It is with disappointment this book is rate a 2 star The reason is the writing was poor The concept is fun Melissa is trying to find her missing little sister Maise Maise's been missing for 6 months and it turns out some rich bitch has turned Maise into a human ponyNow the breaking of Maise would have been interested to watch Having Maise put through some of her paces would have been a delight too Instead the reader is treated to summaries with telling than showing When Melissa is brought into the fold to be a torture pony there is once again telling then showing In addition there are a lot of repetitions of how Melissa will be devastated and broken This repetitive telling became tiresome Another editing issue which is the usage of all caps All caps for several sentences is a no no This is found in free bdsm fiction or fan fiction For this to be a published book with a standard fee it is surprising and disappointingWhen it comes to world building there is very little This would be okay if this was a character driven plot It is not The character building is also very poor There is no connection between the reader and the sisters None of the characters in the story are engaging The part which is most enjoyable is the initial description of Maise when she is found The tail and anal torment was lovely Everything else was mediocre This is why the rating is still a two instead of a one Those who enjoy pony girls humiliation and a bit of non con body modification might enjoy this book It's a very fast read


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When her younger sister Maisie goes missing Melissa begins a six month search for her but she comes up with nothing No leads not even a hint as to where Maisie has gone or why Then out of the blue a mysterious break through A lead a solid lead that she must follow Beginning at a

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HOPE FARM

Fetish party in the burbs and leading to the secluded Hope Farm the mystery and horror unfolds Maybe just maybe it would have been better if Melissa hadn't chosen to follow the lead With hindsight maybe just maybe she should have just let her sister go What Hope Farm would reve Dark Fever party in the burbs and leading to the secluded Hope Farm the mystery and horror unfolds Maybe just maybe it would have been better if Melissa hadn't chosen to follow the lead With hindsight maybe just maybe she should have just let her sister go What Hope Farm would reve

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Al could not be imagined in hers or anyone's worst nightmares A story of pre meditated capture and fetish slavery at the hands of an advanced and capable female sadist Maisie hadn't been the target at all It had always been planned to suck in Melissa Maisie had just been the bai