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Aph s worth of awkward dialogue There was dialogue that felt melodramatic and false such as well about half of the things Vaughn the antagonist said The timeline wasn t clear possibly because the action of the book which covers a period from May to December of 1983 was divided into only three timeblocks ach of which had many very short chapters or numbered sections The nding of the book felt rushed with the fallout brushed over For xample Lyn s reaction to Jared s death is almost nonexistent and not in keeping with her Gustave Caillebotte: The Painter's Eye emotional makeup asstablished Grand Illusion: The Third Reich, the Paris Exposition, and the Cultural Seduction of France earlier in the novel And the final paragraph just didn t make sense from a narrative standpoint It felt like this book suivalent of the heroes riding off into the sunset with hints that we might have
of their adventures heading our way later in other words it was their adventures heading our way later in other words it was and unnecessary Perhaps Kubicek just wasn t sure how he wanted to say The ndI m hoping book 2 in the series will go through a different ditor than this one did someone who can help Kubicek identify the book s weaknesses before it goes to press so that the story can shine through He owes it to himself and to his readers to take that
Extra Step. Stroys step. Stroys memory But Wendy's struggle for acceptance soon turns deadly when ruthless millionaire UFO hunter Earl Vaughn learns her secret and seeks to cash in on The Discovery Of The Millennium.
Read õ PDF, DOC, TXT or Book ´ David KubicekI received this book free after a Goodreadscom giveawayThis book is the first in a trilogy and is I believe his first full length published novel Certainly he is no novice with numerous short stories and 5 non fiction books under his belt but his
bio does not list any other fiction books The publications credit is to his own publication company sodoes not list any other fiction books The publications credit is to his own publication company so don t know if the novel went through an agent or an outside ditor before it was printed Normally it wouldn t occur to me to check that detail but there were parts of the
book where I thought it needed a really good ditor swhere I thought it needed a really good ditor s and I wondered whose hands the book passed through on its way to publicationThis novel has sections that work really well and clunky sections that don t so much For Electromyography for Experimentalists example Kubicek has chosen to use multiple POV characters which is a techniue I generallynjoy however he switches POV so freuently that I had trouble forming a firm opinion about or feel for the characters In fact it wasn t until about page 140 of 326 that the story took on any urgency for me Normally I would not finish a book if I had not Forgetful of Their Sex: Female Sanctity and Society, ca. 500-1100 engaged with the main characters mucharlier in the novel but I found the premis. Wendy knows she's different from her friends She longs to fit in but as hard as she tries she can't uite hide her strangeness What Wendy's friends don't know and what Wendy doesn't remember is .
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itthe story focusesstory focuses a young woman with amnesia after a traumatic attack in which she was beaten and her father was killed a young woman who we uickly figure out is not a normal human at all The woman Wendy has forgotten that she isn t normal and doesn t realize for about half of the book that she is an android albeit one with an independent intelligence and motions and desires and sorrows In fact in all but her body she is as human as anyone in the book Unfortunately for Wendy there are bad people
who suspect she isn t normal and they will stop at nothing tosuspect she isn t normal and they will stop at nothing to her and find out her secrets In that pursuit no one is safe not ven the people closest to Wendy I wanted so much to love this book specially after the author chose me to read and review a free copy but I kept getting pulled out of the story by the writing itself and had trouble reimmersing myself in it There were typos and grammatical Wicked Loving Lies errors that nagged at me things I was sure wouldshould have been caught by a lineditor There were scenes that just didn t work such as the one where Jared is put into a cell with Aaron but the ntire capture is left to a paragr. Hat she is an android built for companionship by a marooned alien She had lived for three years in the uiet community of Antelope Valley Nebraska until a tragic accident kills her creator and de. .